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Ashoka

Well done! You have posted your writing onto the blog yourself.  Your writing is good, but I have 2 things to say to you for your test tomorrow.

Remember that sentences always start with a CAPITAL LETTER. Place names always have CAPITAL LETTERS too, such as: Victoria station. Piccadilly line, Paddington station, Jubilee line, Boundary Road, Kensal Rise, Westbourne Park.

Some words to make sure you know:   straight on, traffic lights, station, minutes, get off the train, get off the bus, zebra crossing, road, opposite, walk, soon, and finally.

And lastly: When you have finished writing you MUST read it carefully and look for mistakes. I always do this myself. Good luck!

Dear Hana

Welcome to London to my Home you said in your letter to me to that you are coming  to London by train to  save your time  I’ll give you  driection to get  my house. Firstly go to victoria station and  take the piccadilly line and  get off in to the kingcrooss Station then change to the piccadilly line and take the jubylee line to  swiss cottage, after that when you get  out the station  and when walk a long  and when 5 minits to my house  .

love from farhiyo,

farhiyo

welcome to London and to my home. You said in your letter to me that you are coming to london by train.

to Save your time I/LL gine you drieetion. get to my house .

First go to victoria  tube Station and take the piccadilly line. Get of  in kingcross Station.  Then  change the piccadilly line and  take the jubylee line to swiss cottage. After that  when you get of the station . come out of  belsize park road.

Then turn left  walk along 10 minits.After that turn left on boundery road.

best wishes,Roya

Dear  Sonya                   

     Welcom  to   London and to my home you said tomein our conversation that  you are coming to London by train to save your time I/ll give  you directionto get to my  house.

    Firstly whenyou arive to Victorea station go out of  the station . Then from victoria  take No 52  Bus  antil  Kinsal  rice .   after  change  No 187  after  Six bus stop then  the bus  say  all soulse avenue then get of the bus .Thencross   the zibra cross   .cross  againthe road  then   Ihave  wait out  of my  doorfor you    see you  sune Sonya  

BEST FRIND    MIRIAM          BY   BY

Dear Haben ,

Welcome to London and to my house.

You said in your letter Converstaion that you are coming cathc satian.First go to Victaria bus statian take Number 36 bus about 45 minutes get off at Padigtaen satian after take bus 23 about 8 bus stop get off at Westborn park station  then your crass Zebar line then walk a long 10 minits then your turn right and left opposite the pub. Finaly you will see my house, you willhave a good time then .

Best wishes,

Hany

Welcome to London and to my home you teke coach bus in Bristol. After 2 hours you come in London Victory Staton .Come out of the Staton then turn left on Bacink place road stirght until you reach Victory staton and take number 16 bus to Kilburn high road get off thebus at kilburn hight road stotion cross the road take Belsize road go straight to Belsize road turn right on to Abbey road.

Wealcome to London for my weading party next month. You said in your letter to me that you are coming to London by train.

To save your time I will give  you direction to get to my house.

First: take the jubilee line and get of the Kingcross.Change the jubilee line  get of the swisscotage undergroun station.

Than you can get to the exit on the left to Finchly Road. And go straight on  . Than cross the three traffic lights. And than left the Chainsburyes.

 Go straight on. After that  turn left to lithos Road.

sincerly yours,

Khalada