Hi All,
Well done! You have posted your writing onto the blog yourself. Your writing is good, but I have 2 things to say to you for your test tomorrow.
Remember that sentences always start with a CAPITAL LETTER. Place names always have CAPITAL LETTERS too, such as: Victoria station. Piccadilly line, Paddington station, Jubilee line, Boundary Road, Kensal Rise, Westbourne Park.
Some words to make sure you know: straight on, traffic lights, station, minutes, get off the train, get off the bus, zebra crossing, road, opposite, walk, soon, and finally.
And lastly: When you have finished writing you MUST read it carefully and look for mistakes. I always do this myself. Good luck!